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Porcelain among the tarnished by ~elucidated:iconelucidated:



A sweet girl,
completely.
New in the world
of corruption and immorality.
A pity
to know how easily
kindness can be manipulated.
Innocense,
wed with naivity.
A lamb
destined for slaughter.
Such a sweet girl,
viewing the world
through rose-colored lenses.
Soon,
the curtains will be raised,
and reality revealed.
Malevolence,
pressed upon her like a vice,
will ravish her purity.
All in time
she will witness her walls crumble.
But for now,
she is still fresh,
unaware of her unfolding story.
©2003-2010 ~elucidated
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:iconmalch:
Very nice. The only thing I noticed off was a typo in 8th line (innocense -> innocence). It's sad that we're all born with a blank slate personality and it crafted to whatever we're exposed to-- and in this sense, eventually everyone becomes corrupt. Well put. I hope to see more works like this.

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